Forbidden

Ten second glance, tingles down my skin,
Lingering in my thoughts...too long.
Masquerading to hide my feelings, denied
Longing for excitement, enchantment...love
 
Take the ladel, stir, stir, stir
Mix, mix, mix...dissolve the lust, desire...longing
Pour in the broth, dilute the untoward emotions.
Erase the wrong.

Make me chocolate decadence tonight
In the harvest moonlight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Saucillo Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 12:33 PM
thank you for this wonderful piece and the kind words you leave on my work. you are a true inspiration.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 5:53 AM
Luv this comparison, Doris, and the chocolate does equal passion in my book.. excellent way to start my day... good job and great write.. how are u feeling? Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"
Gumbo Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 4:48 PM
...take the creamy white of the purest red lips and stir it Write with your fingertips, exposing a woman who's heart is alive, longing for excitement I see in her eyes... sharing with a sister that nothings denied. So purr in the chocolate decadence and mix it with lust and desires intent... then find your forbidden. ;) and Enjoy my friend.
Owens Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 6:45 PM
Love this and you know how I feel about chocolate!!!! lol enjoyed...Marty
Lewis Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 1:31 PM
Very nice. We feel the same way about chocolate. Lol That made my eyes smile!
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 5:45 AM
Pushing down those emotions or are you facing them straight on. Nicely done. Keep writing. Mom
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October 30, 2009 at 4:21 AM
Doris, This one is a real WINNER!!! Perfect capture of hot emotions, Lust, loyalty, and chocolate satisfaction. Perfect! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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