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Forbidden

Ten second glance, tingles down my skin, Lingering in my thoughts...too long. Masquerading to hide my feelings, denied Longing for excitement, enchantment...love Take the ladel, stir, stir, stir Mix, mix, mix...dissolve the lust, desire...longing Pour in the broth, dilute the untoward emotions. Erase the wrong. Make me chocolate decadence tonight In the harvest moonlight.

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Logan Saucillo

Date: 11/10/2009 12:33:00 PM

thank you for this wonderful piece and the kind words you leave on my work. you are a true inspiration.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2009 5:53:00 AM

Luv this comparison, Doris, and the chocolate does equal passion in my book.. excellent way to start my day... good job and great write.. how are u feeling? Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/6/2009 4:48:00 PM

...take the creamy white of the purest red lips and stir it Write with your fingertips, exposing a woman who's heart is alive, longing for excitement I see in her eyes... sharing with a sister that nothings denied. So purr in the chocolate decadence and mix it with lust and desires intent... then find your forbidden. ;) and Enjoy my friend.

Marty Owens

Date: 11/2/2009 6:45:00 PM

Love this and you know how I feel about chocolate!!!! lol enjoyed...Marty

Ts Lewis

Date: 11/1/2009 1:31:00 PM

Very nice. We feel the same way about chocolate. Lol That made my eyes smile!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/30/2009 5:45:00 AM

Pushing down those emotions or are you facing them straight on. Nicely done. Keep writing. Mom

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/30/2009 4:21:00 AM

Doris, This one is a real WINNER!!! Perfect capture of hot emotions, Lust, loyalty, and chocolate satisfaction. Perfect! Lovingly, Dane Ann