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cult member forbidden to marry... anyone outside sect by leader, yet, she did defy him; honor killed. Writing Challenge - F words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Word choice: Forbidden Syllables checked at HMS Date written: 02/15/2023

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2023 1:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being on Constance's winners' list. Way to go. Interesting topic. Sara

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/23/2023 2:33:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sara:-)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/21/2023 12:28:00 PM

A stunning poem Edward! You have expressed so much in a few words. The simplicity is emphasizes the horror! Congratulations and blessings dear friend!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/21/2023 8:42:00 PM

Thank you so much for the awesome feedback and congratulations, Sam:-)

Constance La France

Date: 2/21/2023 9:20:00 AM

Edward, wonderful write, I find this form so difficult although it looks on the surface to be easy, and congratulations on your win my Writing Challenge - F Words, well done, blessings, Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/21/2023 8:39:00 PM

Thank you very much for the feedback, congrats and my placement, Constance:-) Most appreciated.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/16/2023 12:54:00 PM

A few words tells the story/write. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day writing away.................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/17/2023 1:47:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely visit, Paula:-)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/16/2023 11:26:00 AM

Wonderful work here, Edward. Incredible how much can be said in such a small number of words. It's painful to think it's still happening now. Good luck

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/17/2023 1:45:00 AM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Lasaad:-)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/15/2023 9:49:00 PM

So much said in so few words, Edward, brilliant:) sad that it still takes place...

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/16/2023 2:10:00 AM

Yep, happens to this day, sadly. Thanks for the visit, Jo:-)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/15/2023 6:11:00 PM

Great write, Edward ~ I too use this form regularly these days. Good luck in the contest

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/16/2023 2:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Seeker:-) I never heard of this form until Sara's last contest. I love it and plan to use it more.