For You the Life

good morning of day
tailor birds chirping out my window
mild breeze flowing

dawn of the white diamond
golden sunshine from the far sky
a piece of your smiling

fair and coolness  of the surrounding
feeling of drizzling in rainless daybreak
news paper on the table

sipping on a cup of  raw tea
bitterness gives birth sweetened sense on tongue
you are on lotus meditation

bathing, having breakfast
coming out for the daily job
a life mixture of many things 

solicited and unsolicited
mixed up here in this estuary of life
at the breaking of eyes resting

out of the home, of me, of you
my existence wandering to wondering
it’s a life, competition to enjoy happiness

somewhere I find, somewhere I tired
but the elixir of life on your smiling, concession
makes self-satisfaction in the competition


-September 25, 2019 Chattogram

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/26/2019 4:48:00 AM
Made me smile as there was so much to like.
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Date: 9/25/2019 2:45:00 PM
Great poem Mahtab..
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Date: 9/25/2019 10:23:00 AM
Mahtab, "A life mixture of many things". An apt description, told through your senses, in prose. Enjoyed this. -Richard
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Date: 9/25/2019 6:58:00 AM
Very descriptive work. Enjoyed reading t his one today. Thanks for your presence at my page. Sara
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Date: 9/25/2019 6:29:00 AM
- A wonderful description, Mahtab :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2019 4:41:00 AM
Poetically deep--enjoyed reading Mahtab ~ Aloha always William
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