For You, My Love

She feels like the rain-
open and omnipresent.
He feels like the fire-
contained and dampened by her. 

She feels trapped in her words, 
And he strolls in his silence. 
She walks blind
Not knowing when to turn 
or take a step back. 
He barges in with his reasons, 
and knocks her cane off. 

She fumbles with despair, 
He- with his whispers. 
She dances in mad circles,
chasing memories, 
He walks on straight lines-
building beliefs. 

She spends all her days
lying under the tress-
smiling, waiting for the emptiness of the fall.
And he spends all his nights
counting faces, making conversations,
Until he has known them all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 9:20 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Nair Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 2:37 AM
REALLY LOVED THE POEM
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