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For You Are My Gravity

I saw it instantly- the inner repose that encompasses you without fear. your concealed heart is only for my soul to see. now we are wrapped in winter blankets, warmth kept inside two hearts that live for nothing except the longing for each other. I saw it instantly- the intense weakness in your eyes you felt for me without fear. now I have an inclination that we are together for the same reason… to see the blazing and amazing fascination we share without resistance or opposition. for you are my magnet- the gravity pulling me into an existence of extreme devotion. you have always been the charisma I desired.... August 4, 2018

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Date: 8/10/2018 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Romantic imagery. A lovely read.
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Date: 8/9/2018 9:14:00 PM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in Brian's contest, Luloo - great stuff! Keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 8/7/2018 12:22:00 PM
No other feeling can surpass those feelings of love luloo. This is superb! Congratulations on your First Place honors! : )
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Date: 8/6/2018 3:40:00 PM
Lovely, Laura! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/7/2018 10:47:00 AM
many thanks lovely lady, you are a true blessing :)-luloo
Date: 8/6/2018 3:19:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Laura. Superbly penned.
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Date: 8/7/2018 10:47:00 AM
aww thank you sweet Line :)-luloo
Date: 8/5/2018 2:09:00 PM
Utterly romantic and soulful, sweet lady! I love this and thanks so much for my win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/6/2018 7:27:00 AM
you are very welcome lovely Andrea ;) beautiful poem :)-luloo
Date: 8/4/2018 4:56:00 PM
The unseen link of love...A loving write...All the best Laura Loo
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/6/2018 7:26:00 AM
many thanks Arturo! :)-luloo

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