For You Are My Gravity

I saw it instantly-
the inner repose that encompasses you 
without fear.

your concealed heart is only for my soul 
to see.

now we are wrapped in winter blankets,
warmth kept inside two hearts that live 
for nothing except the longing for each 
other. 

I saw it instantly-
the intense weakness in your eyes you felt 
for me without fear.

now I have an inclination that we are together 
for the same reason…
to see the blazing and amazing fascination we 
share without resistance or opposition. 

for you are my magnet-
the gravity pulling me into an existence of 
extreme devotion.

you have always been the charisma I desired....


August 4, 2018
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Gentry Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Congratulations on your win. Romantic imagery. A lovely read.
Barden Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in Brian's contest, Luloo - great stuff! Keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 12:22 PM
No other feeling can surpass those feelings of love luloo. This is superb! Congratulations on your First Place honors! : )
Haight Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Lovely, Laura! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 10:47 AM
many thanks lovely lady, you are a true blessing :)-luloo
Gauthier Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Laura. Superbly penned.
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 10:47 AM
aww thank you sweet Line :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Utterly romantic and soulful, sweet lady! I love this and thanks so much for my win.
Scars Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:27 AM
you are very welcome lovely Andrea ;) beautiful poem :)-luloo
Michael Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 4:56 PM
The unseen link of love...A loving write...All the best Laura Loo
Scars Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:26 AM
many thanks Arturo! :)-luloo
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