For You

If I could gaze down into your eyes we would gently share such beautifully soft and dirty kisses our mouths and lips and tongues in slow and secret collusion and as our bodies slowly moved against each other, I would put my lips to yours and breathing your breath, I would murmur to you all of the ways I love you.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2013 11:57:00 PM

love this one. Just was seeing it again. soupmail for ya.

Skat A

Date: 4/16/2013 4:14:00 AM

I like the title You better, somehow it fits much better. It specializes the power of one person. Lovely~*~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2013 7:50:00 PM

oooh lala. This is a heated one I somehow missed in the lineup!!! Very nice. can't believe I didn't have you as a fave poet yet either. DONE.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/13/2013 12:17:00 AM

Well, I like this ;} thank you for reading my Shadows ;}

Ruby Honeytip

Date: 3/7/2013 8:42:00 PM

Phew...Pink cheeks!! Lips and tongues and dirty stuff....love this poem and had to visit again. You are a divine and important poet x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2013 8:55:00 AM

Reading this sweet poem once again... I love being the big YOU in my life... xox~PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/1/2013 9:05:00 PM

Another wonderful and amazing poem, this one left me in WOW's... a deep and dirty kiss.. now that is juicy, ... love the swallowing of the deep eyes. now this is what i call deep passion... truly is a lovely poem.. LINDA

Ruby Honeytip

Date: 2/28/2013 3:57:00 AM

I love the way you write.....your talent floats through this poem like bubbles through champagne xxx Endless, timelessly beautiful......this one is taken straight to my heart xxxxx