Elizabeth Bark Poet Shape

For You

you take my heart and
b     e      k
    r      a
it...you make me feel like im..       
                                                   g                                           
                                        n 
                             i
                  y
         l
f
then you break my heart and make me

F
  A
     L
       L

I fall so hard and hit the ground with a 
THUD

but my 

L         OOOO   V         V   EEEEE
L         O     O    V       V    E
L         O     O     V     V     EEE
L         O     O      V  V       E
LLLLL  OOOO        V         EEEEE
is still and always will be 

for:


YOU

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Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2011 at 6:18 AM wow! nice for,,, and shapes... sad when we don't give... but it all fly's out the window... and mends.. together ,, always,..Linda

Carolyn Devonshire March 11, 2011 at 7:53 AM It's sad when we love someone and they continue to hurt us, Elizabeth. You must love him a lot. Very creative layout and clearly expressed sentiments of both pain and love. Best wishes, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico February 11, 2011 at 3:16 PM Soup mail ....

Adam Ferguson February 11, 2011 at 6:27 AM good poem.

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2011 at 11:41 PM CUTE!!!

Michael J. Falotico February 10, 2011 at 1:38 PM I love this form but feel your hurt throughout it... Smile Angel.... Soup mail 4 u.....luv Michael

Tobey Hill February 10, 2011 at 9:00 AM very creative...TAH