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you take my heart and b e k r a it...you make me feel like im.. g n i y l f then you break my heart and make me F A L L I fall so hard and hit the ground with a THUD but my L OOOO V V EEEEE L O O V V E L O O V V EEE L O O V V E LLLLL OOOO V EEEEE is still and always will be for: YOU

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Date: 6/16/2011 6:18:00 AM
wow! nice for,,, and shapes... sad when we don't give... but it all fly's out the window... and mends.. together ,, always,..Linda
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Date: 3/11/2011 7:53:00 AM
It's sad when we love someone and they continue to hurt us, Elizabeth. You must love him a lot. Very creative layout and clearly expressed sentiments of both pain and love. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2011 3:16:00 PM
Soup mail ....
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Date: 2/11/2011 6:27:00 AM
good poem.
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:41:00 PM
CUTE!!!
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Date: 2/10/2011 1:38:00 PM
I love this form but feel your hurt throughout it... Smile Angel.... Soup mail 4 u.....luv Michael
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Date: 2/10/2011 9:00:00 AM
very creative...TAH
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