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Since morning pondering how to write a good poem for you wrote several but what comes out is story of my failure, a story of disappointment, feeling blue; no that's not poem, it’s saga of worry. Yes, reluctant to share a story that would make you gloomy; surely desires to see you always content; That's the heartfelt thought to write poem, to see your smile truly to meet you in happy mood, with no dissent. Thinking if I can't bring happiness, why share suffering, pain as it would definitely make you unhappy; why to pull you in my life what's in a world of inhumane when I am convinced that won't make you happy. Rather I should be certainly far away to make you free from difficulties; Maybe destiny wishes it for me. ~X~X~X~
Bush Ballad Meter Sonnet :: Creator: Lawrence Eberhart, aka on Allpoetry as Lawrencealot. Syllabic: L1 through L2 alternate 15 and 11 syllable. Lines 13 and 14 each have 15 syllables. Rhyme pattern: ababcdcdefefgg; Metric: Primarily anapestic and iambic meter. Creator feels technically all lines begin with an anapest, the first 6 long lines then have 2 tertius paeons and 2 iambs’ the short lines have four iambs, the last two have 1 tertius paeon and 4 iambs Pasted from http://poetscollective.org/everysonnet/bush-ballad-meter-sonnet/ Thanks to Mr Lawrence Eberhart for the resource at Poets COLLECTIVE Site.

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