For Too Long

For too long I have remembered you
a memory each day that pours over me
    washing what was
into reflections of cluttered thoughts
    from distant days
that may or may not have been true
They come like flocks of birds gliding in my mind
diving in unison, only to disperse
like fallen leaves that are scattered by the wind
torn into pieces, as brown petals do
    from the stem of a dying rose
tumbling on earthen ground in an empty garden
    once filled with blooms
tossed about by thoughts of love's demise
with vanishing footsteps trailing away
to a dull gray horizon, where the sun never rises
and the round sky rolls away, leaving nothing
but a hollow space where beauty was
    before being torn, wilting away
on conquered ground, like a vanquished foe
left bleeding on the broken steps of loneliness
    When love died
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Awesome poignant poetry on lost love. So nice
Onclaud Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 9:43 PM
you leave me breathless, frederick!
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 1:39 AM
- Memories of summer pleasure are distant and perhaps not true ... are taken by the sharp winds of autumn ... and die ... heartbreakingly sad, Frederic ... wonderfully written - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Onclaud Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 8:26 PM
wrenchingly poignant and intimate, frederick...
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 5:39 PM
the imagery and tone of your poem left me breathless. I could feel the heartbreak and pain. Faving.
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