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Its official: I am an old fart

- For Tom Cunningham and Jan Allison -

old man
                                             big plan

                                             ladies
                                             nineties

                                             big t*ts  (*i :)
                                             will fit

                                            toothless
                                            bootless

                                            his grief
                                            no kiss

                                            old date
                                            your fate

                                            time out
                                            he pouts





                                   Dedicated to Tom & Jan

                                          02.11.2020
                                   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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James Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Fun footles Anne-Lise, enjoyed thank you, Emilia : )
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 3:33 AM
- Thank you very much, Emilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Laurie Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 3:04 PM
G’day Anne-Lise … Tom and Jan like us readers will find your footle very amusing indeed - thanks Anne-Lise - Lindsay
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 7:50 AM
- Thank you very much, Lindsay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 2:34 PM
I am sure you put a smile on their faces, Sunshine. Cute idea.
Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 2:56 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 4:50 AM
This is really funny Sunshine Smile - sure they both enjoyed the dedication, but reading down to the bottom I see they did. Sweet of you to think of doing it m y friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 10:14 AM
- Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 2:42 PM
LOL! This is so adorably funny :)
Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 10:14 AM
- Thank you very much, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 1:05 AM
Fun footles, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 1:51 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Crabtree Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:14 PM
I love the footles, Anne-Lise! A great dedication to Tom and Jan :)
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 1:51 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:11 PM
So sweet, Anne-Lise!!
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 1:50 AM
- Thank you very much, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:05 PM
LOL, I'm sure they loved these too : )
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 1:50 AM
- Thank you very much, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 4:39 AM
And I am sure both will be gob smacked with happiness to see this dedication.
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 1:50 AM
- Thank you very much, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 4:02 AM
Love it... so cute :) God bless you sweet lady :)
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 1:49 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 1:04 AM
So long ass our two famous writers are happy...:) ~~
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:32 PM
- I did not know that they were famous writers ... omg. I may have offended them ... :))) - Be happy, my friend Victor :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 11:21 PM
excellent choice. Anne-Lise, great footles
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:38 PM
- Harry, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:16 PM
LOL, Anne-Lise! Nice dedication!
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:37 PM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 4:39 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is a wonderful dedication piece to two amazing poets. Well done:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:37 PM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 1:29 PM
aww thanks so much Anne-lise these are fun:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:36 PM
- I'm not that good at footle, Jan ... just for fun and you ... glad you liked this one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 12:37 PM
Haha love it Anne, thanks for the mention. Tom
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:34 PM
- Glad you enjoyed it, Tom ... thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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