For Those Left Behind

(1946)

Walking in Sailor Fields amongst the nettles
picking blackberries, the brambles 
cut deep savage the mind.
Yet the bowl to be filled the jam
to be boiled the bread of hope
to be flavoursome, while the innocence
of it all enhanced by the beauty of the place. 
The Village shimmers in idyllic peace,
while each evening from the east the veil of night
chases the setting sun, bequeaths it’s
heavenly sequin blanket soon to lovingly
cloak God’s very own.
Life had not changed all that much
in the place, except the men had returned
leaving their memories over yonder,
while some stayed away their bones to lie
within ‘Alien Soil’ 
Alas the hurt does not diminish,
for those left behind walking in Sailor Fields
amongst the nettles picking blackberries!

© Harry J Horsman  2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/22/2018 4:13:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Harry. Well done.
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Date: 11/15/2018 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Harry :)
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Date: 3/10/2012 12:13:00 PM
A wonderful write, Harry. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:58:00 AM
gr8 write...........congratson the placement.............~sashi
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Date: 3/7/2012 9:12:00 PM
congrats Harry luv on another stellar writ an win for these electrifying lines my friend.. hope u are doing well ..luv..
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Date: 3/7/2012 3:11:00 PM
congrats on your contest win; a thoughtful and poignant write with a very 'classical' feel to it...
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Date: 3/7/2012 12:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win Harry...great job
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:53:00 AM
Good afternoon and congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "3rd place wins Only" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:10:00 AM
HARRY,,.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:08:00 PM
Harry, this is beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/14/2011 10:33:00 AM
oh, my gosh, it's also on the same theme that nette's used. I see Chris loves these sad ones about the aftermath of war,and why not? wow, Harry, you did an excellent job with this. Very poetic! Congratulations.
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Date: 3/9/2011 7:05:00 AM
Special words Harry my friend so deeply emoted in this piece... wonderful expressions of memories past .. amazing win for an amazing write luv..
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:02:00 AM
Wow Harry awesome. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/9/2011 4:52:00 AM
Harry a moving and vividly beautiful write, with an amazing end.. Congratulations on your win ;) love Wilma
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:48:00 PM
This is another very moving poem, Harry! Happy to see this score way up high-- super congrats on this amazingly written poem!
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:22:00 PM
Congrats harry on another great win in Chris's contest luv.. an awesome write again.. as always ..my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:38:00 PM
I'm so pleased to see this in the winners' circle, Harry. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:34:00 PM
wonderful , love it, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Chris, harry
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris's contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:10:00 AM
our minds are in war/at war/pumped and primed by the drums of war...I suppose something good comes from everything? Wonderful write mt The Wakening is about the global revolutions too! Congrad's on this fine win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:23:00 AM
I would have guessed this poem to be among the classics of old....the book of poems that have sat on shelves for those who collect works by the masters. Stunning! Congratulations, Harry!
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Date: 3/7/2011 7:07:00 PM
The year of my birth. This was just an outstanding piece. Vince
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Date: 3/6/2011 11:10:00 PM
we both did a similar theme, harry.. this is dynamic! all the winning's best! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/6/2011 8:27:00 PM
Very descriptive, Harry. Is Sailor Fields a cemetery for seafarers who did return home. I hate to think of our men's bones lying on "alien Soil." Awesome entry for Chris's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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