Stephen Blencowe Poet Blank verse

For Their Eyes Only

They are the eyes behind the glass..

           No line of sight for them..

                    There's shadows playing in the dark....
            
                             and only certain darkness...

                                       No light to show the way..

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 23, 2012 at 12:44 PM Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#184" contest Stephen. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards June 22, 2012 at 8:30 AM There could be so many hidden meanings here.... I love it! Congratulations!

Kash Poet June 22, 2012 at 4:57 AM Very nice!!Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich June 21, 2012 at 7:29 PM A dark one this seems to be. I really like the "feel" of this one. Evocative. Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 21, 2012 at 6:03 PM super congrats on first place win luv.. awesome piece ...

Debbie Guzzi June 21, 2012 at 2:18 PM Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

Joann Grisetti June 21, 2012 at 1:45 PM Congratulations on your poem winning.

Poet Destroyer A June 21, 2012 at 11:34 AM Stephen, congratulations with your wonderful win in Brian's contest... Take care pd... ;-)

Terry O'Leary June 21, 2012 at 2:45 AM Very nice poem... I love 'eyes' poems... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2012 at 5:21 AM Very well done this poem Stephen, like it. - oxox Anne-Lise Stephen Blencowe June 13, 2012 at 5:30 AM Thanks Anne-lies it is always good to hear from you