1st in One in Five Contest (Sponsor: Joseph May)
Judged: July 6th, 2025
The rising sun sets day apart Night walks with us but not afar Along the bridge, our gilded heart The rising sun Lacustrine swans flecked by Earth's star Sail on soft waves, awaking art Pen scuds to greet the morning tsar Wings spread, light piercing breasts, a dart Arrows of love breaking the bar Scenes of tarry night doth depart The rising sun
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