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1st in One in Five Contest (Sponsor: Joseph May)

Judged: July 6th, 2025

The rising sun sets day apart
Night walks with us but not afar
Along the bridge, our gilded heart
The rising sun

Lacustrine swans flecked by Earth's star
Sail on soft waves, awaking art
Pen scuds to greet the morning tsar

Wings spread, light piercing breasts, a dart
Arrows of love breaking the bar
Scenes of tarry night doth depart
The rising sun

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Date: 7/7/2025 5:31:00 PM
So beautiful. Congrats to you
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/8/2025 8:09:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea ~ TL.
Date: 7/7/2025 6:45:00 AM
Trina, CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/8/2025 8:08:00 PM
Appreciated ~ TL.
Date: 7/6/2025 6:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win Trina, Very nicely done
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/8/2025 8:07:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!

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