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Joseph May - One in Five Roundel Contest - 14-06-2025

tsar = czar

The rising sun sets day apart Night walks with us but not afar Along the bridge, our gilded heart The rising sun Lacustrine swans flecked by Earth's star Sail on soft waves, awaking art Pen scuds to greet the morning tsar Wings spread, light piercing breasts, a dart Arrows of love breaking the bar Scenes of tarry night doth depart The rising sun 1.

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Date: 7/7/2025 5:31:00 PM
So beautiful. Congrats to you
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/8/2025 8:09:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea ~ TL.
Date: 7/7/2025 6:45:00 AM
Trina, CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/8/2025 8:08:00 PM
Appreciated ~ TL.
Date: 7/6/2025 6:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win Trina, Very nicely done
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/8/2025 8:07:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!

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