For the Poetic Epitaph Contesthere I Lay On This Day.

Here I lay on this day.
A great soul has gone away.
They gave me a blanket so I wouldn't get cold.
They gave money from people that owed.
I'll miss all the dinners and the food we'd eat.
The great desserts and those wonderful treats.
I was a great lady and always a great friend.
I will be missed till they see me again.
                  Teresa Skyles

Wrote for Andrea's poetic Epitaph contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:45 AM
Congratulations on your win with this very creative work..Sara
Wilson Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 7:01 PM
very nice epitaph..congratulations! take care~Deb
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest Teresa. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 9:02 AM
Congrats Teresa my friend on your win in Andrea's cool contest with this awesome epitaph .. great words luv..enjoy a special win today...
Devonshire Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Indeed, you would be missed, my friend. Congratulations, Teresa! Love, Carolyn
Horsman Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:19 AM
congrats Teresa, on this wonderful Epitaph. Harry
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Teresa
Taylor Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Congrats, Teresa. Excellent write. Nice going. xxxRalph
Neels Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 4:28 AM
Congratualations on your win in Andrea's contest with this insightful write Teresa :) Wilma
K. Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 10:16 PM
Congrats on your win in this insightful epitaph, Teresa :) -- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:35 PM
Congratulations, Teresa, on your 10th place. I enjoyed seeing what you would like people to remember of you and the things of earth you would miss. LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:22 PM
lovely entry , congrats on your well deserved win
Reents Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 7:48 PM
Short and sweet to the point good epitaph
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 9:23 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this beautiful morning Teresa. May your day be full of inspiration. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 1:46 PM
A great take on the contest..well done. BG
Culverhouse Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 1:20 PM
yep...so sad
Sweetheart Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 1:02 PM
Teresa this is spectacular my friend.. a wonderful contest entry for Andrea .. she will luv this honest approach to the contest.. my entry is "Etchings" ... good luck and a grand write my friend...
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