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For the One Who Got Away

If you saw me today - not that inexperienced 17-year-old woman child whose summer-fresh face you once caressed - would you feel again the way I think we both were feeling at that time? I like to believe it was love that gazed back at me then with those dark shining eyes. But we never said "the words." Would your eyes still shine to see me again? In that short time, did you love me? We took our separate paths. Sadly, I know not where yours led or if you still breathe the air of this earth. If our paths were somehow to cross again, would you tell me if you had loved me then? If somehow we met again and were free to be again what we seemed to have been becoming had we not just let it slip away. . . could you tell me in this moment that you loved me? A poem revised 4/21/19 for Line Gauthier's "What Was Left Unsaid" Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/17/2020 9:31:00 PM
Interesting to wonder of such things.
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Date: 3/17/2020 12:35:00 PM
This brings to mind a lovely face from my college days. Often wonder whatever became of her and whether the spark I felt back then was one-sided or not. Probably never know! Great write, loved it, and congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 4/27/2019 10:54:00 AM
Thought provoking, especially in that we all toy with those memories from time to time and perhaps wonder if others do as well - this proves it - or is it true, as Thomas Wolfe once wrote, "We can't go home again".
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Date: 4/24/2019 4:49:00 PM
What might have been leaves so many feelings without closure. You express this perfect in this poem Andrea. Best for a win! xxoo
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/25/2019 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your high placement! xxoo
Date: 4/22/2019 1:40:00 PM
This is exactly why some people get crazy about each other again at a class reunion. Well done indeed!
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Date: 4/22/2019 6:08:00 AM
What's left unsaid is the worst, the not knowing. Well written Andrea and good luck. Tom.
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Date: 4/21/2019 6:07:00 PM
You expressed so well what first loves feels. I really related Andrea
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Date: 4/21/2019 3:43:00 PM
very poignant, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 4/21/2019 2:35:00 PM
You expressed well the things unsaid that never found closure..Best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 4/21/2019 1:41:00 PM
- I think it's a difficult question ... another time ... another place ... the time is gone .... a lovely poem, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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