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For the Love of God

God's children just would not behave
So he drowned them all with a wave
Devoid of all pity
He'll raze an whole city
God's love always leads to a grave!

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John Lawless

April 11, 2021 at 5:19 PM

...no one gets out alive...the trick is to live while we are here...

Mystic Rose Rose

April 11, 2021 at 2:12 PM

and sometimes God's love leads to heaven: I'm gonna be good and stack the odds on my side lol, nice one Rico, blessings :)

L Milton Hankins

April 11, 2021 at 1:04 PM

Nice, Rico. I think you are short a syllable in the second line, but, otherwise this is a good one. I enjoyed it immensely. A lot of truth in it, too.

Rob Carmack

April 11, 2021 at 11:26 AM

Consider: God's love leads to conviction, his wrath to death. His only children on Earth during the flood were on the Ark. Most peeps are not God's children, then, now and forever.

Rico Leffanta

April 11, 2021 at 11:35 AM

Rob, it seems you were robbed of common sense! "Most peeps are not god's children"? Did you hear that on FOX News? Aloha! Rico