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For the Love of God

God's children just would not behave So he drowned them all with a wave Devoid of all pity He'll raze an whole city God's love always leads to a grave!

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John Lawless

Date: 4/11/2021 5:19:00 PM

...no one gets out alive...the trick is to live while we are here...

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/11/2021 2:12:00 PM

and sometimes God's love leads to heaven: I'm gonna be good and stack the odds on my side lol, nice one Rico, blessings :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/11/2021 1:04:00 PM

Nice, Rico. I think you are short a syllable in the second line, but, otherwise this is a good one. I enjoyed it immensely. A lot of truth in it, too.

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/11/2021 11:26:00 AM

Consider: God's love leads to conviction, his wrath to death. His only children on Earth during the flood were on the Ark. Most peeps are not God's children, then, now and forever.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/11/2021 11:35:00 AM

Rob, it seems you were robbed of common sense! "Most peeps are not god's children"? Did you hear that on FOX News? Aloha! Rico

Eve Roper

Date: 4/11/2021 11:16:00 AM

Just stopping by to say hi , the sky a place to fly, with a sigh, I cry, because I cannot fly. WHY! (my CAPTCHA is BSS)