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For the Girl With the Brand New Toothbrush

The Girl with the Brand New Toothbrush [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fF6X4jwBnOc"]YouTube[/ame] For the girl with the brand new toothbrush Waiting on a one night stand We didn’t have to tell the Truth much Didn’t make many plans Got right down to the good stuff Fulfilled exchanged demands Till the next day at constant play of bouncing batter ram For the girl with the Colgate toothbrush The one I’ll never use again No one had to introduce us I never had to meet your friends Never got ugly and ruthless Never threw you out again One time one day wonderful lay So glad I’ve been your man #in away at her newness Working a wiggle in Willy was well made to do this willing do it again Wasn’t constrained by rudeness wasn’t ever worried bout them But like a werewolf Willy went wild with the moon just whaling at a womb till ten This song goes out to the toothbrush A hard body put in her bin Only an angel’d do thus serendipity sin Rampant replicant, Rembrant Pant participant now Insignificant remnant of magnificent meow (Well spent sycophant content “What a wonderful! WOW” Wham went impotent, wham went Whamin through that some how) Dawn sent immigrant intent Brushing our teeth and chow Last philanderant indent On MAGNIFICENT MEeeeeOW

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Debbie Cook

Date: 4/6/2016 6:24:00 AM

nice write

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2016 2:26:00 AM

Dan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Dan Short
Date: 3/27/2016 11:42:00 PM

thanks, goin fishin, so won't post for a month or so, but I'll put some more up when I get back. wish me luck

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2016 4:19:00 AM

Awesome poem Dan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@