For the Best

My old site was a great place
To shed some light of His Grace
To write a story and have it read
In all the Glory in what He said

But it would change in a whole new way
As they rearrange all the words that I say
Being confused and wandering about
My head I used giving poetry soup a shout

I took the old and added some new
Some being bold but just as true
And as I wrote and had my say
I got a note that very same day

What a wonderful surprise I came to know
As through others eyes you begin to grow
And as I respond such talent do I find
Poems so fond it just blows my mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 8:49 AM
In with the old and out with the new. A great shout out for SOUP.
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December 27, 2013 at 12:09 AM
Vincent, I'm glad you found the poetry soup site. Your poetry has been very uplifting, ...please don't ever leave us... Always.. Your newest fan... LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 5:29 PM
Glad that you are enjoying soup..We are so many different kinds that you are bound to like some..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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