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For So Dear A Life Keep On Fighting

You are not lying just a bitter ache hiding acceptance is God’s blessing deep Faith pain healing. ***** A mission of Love not a call of duty! That’s beyond and above moments in time of devotion your acts of love, a drop from an ocean reminiscing weary souls in youth's grasp cherished and cradled to the last gasp. ***** A mission of gratitude to a soul with noble qualities imbued a whole journey of giving a natural spirit of caring to a precious parent so much we owe the power of endurance, a willow! ***** You are not hiding a truth you're revealing the secret of Hope, in sooth you’re keeping the flow of fountain of youth you just have spared words of pity and ruth. ***** A mission of honour a parent, a real treasure.. alive or a goner earning parenthood and humanity deserving of being graced by respect and dignity treated like royalty, served with sensibility honoured for who they were, are, have become out of Love not duty. ***** You are not lying you just want your loved one to keep smiling and have a precious soul forget that an end is coming for so dear a Life.. keep on fighting. November 21st, 2020

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Date: 11/29/2020 6:13:00 AM
What a breathtaking tribute that all mothers could read and think it is for them. Your eloquent write and deep sensitivity is beyond wrods, and it although touches the heart reached and sparked a fire in my soul. I loved my mother dearly and she was the world's greatest mum, but my dad was the universe's greatest dad. I love your poem dear Besma and I love our friendship, it is a blessed one. Hugs and xxx Jennifer.
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Date: 12/16/2020 12:04:00 AM
Parents are precious souls who inspire, warm and enrich our very souls with Love, beauty, endurance and insight.. blessed you are with your loving and caring parents sweet friend and soul sister Jenny.. and I am so blessed, delighted and grateful for so warm and hearty compliment wrapped in your generosity and humility.. I highly appreciate your wonderful presence and response! Thank you so much for the beauty you pour over my humble soul and poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Date: 11/29/2020 4:24:00 AM
Dear Besma I have a mum who is 90 who we respect and love and your poem could well be about her!! superb. it touched my heart! At her age she likes nothing more than the happiness of her children. I make sure to show and express love! not just keep it in my heart! well done!!
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Date: 12/1/2020 3:29:00 AM
You are so blessed, Krish! To have with you now your precious mum, may God bless and protect her.. A blessing from God to live such a wonderful relationship showing the love and care to a so dear parent and be able to serve.. thank you so much for being here to share your thoughts and sentiments. My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 11/24/2020 6:07:00 AM
Sense and sensibility: your poem is a tribute to a woman who deserves great praise. For in her suffering she still maintains serenity and think only of her duty to her offsprings. You display great emotions even if kept under control. A real poet and person worthy of praise. Whatever the future I wish you high blessings and deepest regards. ~~
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Date: 11/26/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor for reading and feeling my humble words.. and you display a genuine beauty of mind and soul and a remarkable humility.. your warm and hearty wishes are highly appreciated.. deeply elated and touched.. God bless you. My deepest regards.
Date: 11/23/2020 4:33:00 AM
The grown-ups are an inexhaustible source of wisdom, love and insight into this life. those close to us have given body and soul for our well-being, our duty is at least give them a heartfelt smile before they leave for a better world. may God hear your call of duty to serve them, protect them cherish them until the day they close they eye..and your heart a big satisfaction. Emotive poetry full of wisdom, and an advice to take care 'bout those on the fringe of death...stay happy always.
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Date: 11/24/2020 2:15:00 AM
When a loving daughter, a dear friend of mine, wipes her pain and swallows her tears deciding to hide a diagnosis of breast cancer creeping into the life of her precious 80 year mother.. smiling to her that she is fine and in a good health.. I had but to salute her act of valour and love! The least we can do to ensure a happy and decent end.. Thank you so much, Hamid for your inspiring presence and insightful response to my humble words.. Always a great pleasure to see you here writing your so beautiful poetry.. Happiness to your soul. Stay always safe and blessed. My deepest regards.
Date: 11/21/2020 11:51:00 AM
This is s beautiful touching poem, reminding one to keep the hope and never give...
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Date: 11/24/2020 2:02:00 AM
When we are unconditionally touched in every single part of our soul by the Love and care of so precious parents we can but be abidingly grateful recognizing their beautiful worth.. thank you so much, Silent One for your genuine response and support. My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 11/21/2020 7:38:00 AM
In praise of the bond we all have for mothers. Your poem dwells in such loving and caring sentiments, so well expressed! They are always looking out for loved one till their last breath. A heartfelt poem you wrote, Besma.
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Date: 11/24/2020 1:56:00 AM
So strong a bond of whom we are ever find.. thank you so much dear Vijay for such a heartfelt feedback! I'm so thankful to you for always being generously appreciative of my humble poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.