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For Site Crashers

L acking the common sense of a maggot
O bviously attention starved as a child
S orry excuse for a human being
E merging from a place where dung was piled
R ejected for a lack of talent
S tuck in a self pity life beguiled

Copyright © Vince Suzadail Jr. | Year Posted 2011

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Robert Pettit Date: 2/2/2012 9:21:00 PM I saw plenty of those persons you describe above on a now-defunct poetry site. They had no idea what poetry was about, and they gave me low ratings for some of my best efforts. Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/29/2011 12:29:00 PM YES, a pile of Losers is what you describe in your poem. Why do they have to be maggots? Hope all is well with you and family. love phyl Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 9/25/2011 10:14:00 AM Sounds familiar. As an ex-teacher I can relate. Good to hear from you, Vince. Love, daver Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/19/2011 5:23:00 PM LOL, witty write, Vince - and thanks for your kind message. Hope your team's doing well (we don't hear the results over here) Login to Reply

Joseph Osita Date: 9/19/2011 7:12:00 AM A very well penned poem. There is meaning in every line of the poem. Have a great day,Vince Login to Reply

E.J. Smith Date: 9/18/2011 6:33:00 PM WOW! I know this person! Very well done.E.J. Login to Reply

Jay O'Neal Date: 8/29/2011 9:13:00 PM Wow! Very emotional write, well done; Jay oh, thanks for the recent comments on my work. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/28/2011 9:32:00 PM love it, vince. TOo bad we can't drag him out into the open!! Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 8/24/2011 7:25:00 PM this is funny Vince. A very effective Acrostic! Lays it down right where it is and with humor. And thanks for the comment on Balloon payment. Much appreciated . He told Gadafi he should step down and relinquish power.... Some nerve. He' is the one who needs to step down but the media loves him and most people listen to the media like they were gods of a sort. Tsk tsk Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/24/2011 4:23:00 PM Good one..Got a good chuckle..Sara Login to Reply

Chiquitachiamaka Baity Date: 8/17/2011 10:10:00 AM Very emotional write Vince...well penned...thanks for sharing...smiles..chiquita Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 8/13/2011 11:10:00 AM Yes, this site has been blighted by such low-life recently. A good, caustic write with real artistic merit too! Regards, Robert. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/12/2011 3:20:00 PM Nice emtional write, Vince Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 8/11/2011 11:22:00 PM Is this what is going on with this site, Vince? Great rebuttal to the emotions out there. lol. Fun acrostic.......you're not ANGRY are you? ha. ha. Gwendolen Login to Reply