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Oh, Sara Sara, oh, in your warm voice I see You as you are, I feel you free. Your hands, they deal the cards, they hold the key, they paint my day, for they unfold to a degree the layers to my heart carefree? In early morning coffee.... Oh, Sara Sara, oh, My warm eye paints you red: A colour full of love. We are no saints, but that said, I hold you high above the crowd, a dragon. I bet You smile. You love dragons as do I, you had one just for you. Oh, Sara Sara, oh we fly above the crowd, you and I. But now I let you glide, don't cry. How masterfully you ride the sky. How free you drift, How high. *** May 11, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Claudia Polydoro

Date: 5/14/2017 8:28:00 PM

This is a great one, hun loved it <3

Darren White
Date: 5/14/2017 11:38:00 PM

Thanks Clau, Sara did too :) <3

Maria Williams

Date: 5/12/2017 3:41:00 AM

Oh I do love dragons so, and this is such a delight, I'm sure your lovely friend Sara holds it very dear coming from a lovely friend like you dear Darren. A7++ Maria

Darren White
Date: 5/12/2017 3:44:00 AM

She does :) Thank you so much, Maria, also for your 7!

Sara Ella

Date: 5/11/2017 2:42:00 PM

Flying!!! :D Thank you Darren <3 This is a wonderful surprise! You are the BEST!!! I LOVE the rhyme, it is like a song <3 Dragons, especially this beautiful red one, are COOL and so, my most awesome friend, are you! :) HUGS!

Darren White
Date: 5/11/2017 2:50:00 PM

I wrote it with music playing, as always. So it is in a way a lyric. I also knew you'd like that red dragon :) Fly high my friend, and yeah love you too, lots! <3

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/11/2017 12:32:00 PM

Such an ethereal delight!

Darren White
Date: 5/11/2017 12:56:00 PM

Thanks Kim :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/11/2017 9:05:00 AM

So sweet Darren

Darren White
Date: 5/11/2017 9:08:00 AM

Yes :) Thanks Tim.

Chris Green

Date: 5/11/2017 9:02:00 AM

A beautiful tribute my friend. Sara is always so kind and encouraging when she pops in, I just wish we could see more writing from here. Maybe this will prompt her to put her pen to work again. Really nice Darren.

Darren White
Date: 5/11/2017 9:08:00 AM

She is, and she is my dear friend. 'twas time to write something for her :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/11/2017 7:59:00 AM

A 7 for this beautiful, moving poem, Darren. You have a style all your own--very appealing! Janice

Darren White
Date: 5/11/2017 9:05:00 AM

Janice, thank you so very much :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/11/2017 3:55:00 AM

Good Morning Darren. Oh Sara will love this. Such expression and gusto. You say Rhyme and I see the rhyme I also see Free Verse that only the mighty Free Verse could execute and pull off. Have a wonderful day Darren. I hope this day finds Sara well also. PS: I love the attached image for it is stunning. Well done penguin

Darren White
Date: 5/11/2017 4:03:00 AM

Thanks Lisa :) And yes, you are right. There is however a distinct rhyme to it, sometimes internal, and a meter. But for me it doesn't matter. Free Verse is my favourite. I hope Sara will like this :)