For Sale

...inspired by 'The Auction' by Theodore Roethke


I woke to find confusion in my yard,
signs 'FOR SALE!' had sprouted overnight,
it seemed that people far and wide had heard
"EVERYTHING MUST GO!" a frightful sight!

"Take Vanity," declared the auctioneer,
"Arrogance and Anger, special, two for one,
Indiscretion will look good on your chiffonier,
a box of Grief, come on, we're almost done!"

'Twas barely noon, my garden was a wreck,
bits of Indecision scattered here and there,
Laziness had gone, nary a speck,
no sign of Despair, no remnant anywhere.

Hundreds rummaged through my underwear,
like a bargain basement they were indiscreet,
they left, and there was not a thing to spare,
my soul was clean at last, my life was sweet!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 27, 2012 at 5:40 PM
i love the message here Keith, enjoyed the poem,..p.d.
Wesley Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 4:24 PM
Wow! An auction for bad habits that turned out to be successful. Great personification you have going here. It seems I cana't get past any without a need to say something. They are all great! Love, Lizzie
Novotny Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 2:42 AM
It is rare that entire poem will sustain a metaphor, and you have pulled it off. Well written, and masterfully creative - Chuck
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April 29, 2012 at 12:34 PM
I like it even more :) :) smile - Well written - oxox love Anne-Lise
Night Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 10:04 AM
liked this one :-)
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