Doris Culverhouse Poet Haiku

For Raul Moreno

Buck panting, gurgling
blood filling his lungs, run down
steep slope, MUST escape...
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For Raul's contest(Solace in Nature)

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Frances King September 7, 2009 at 5:47 PM You caught the panic perfectly! Thanks for your comments, if you look at Cosmopolitan again, I've put a note to explain. I think you hunt with rifles in the US - we do it differently ...

James Fraser September 4, 2009 at 12:06 PM Terrific Haiku, all the very best in Raul's contest>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown September 4, 2009 at 3:38 AM Wishing you the best in the contest Doris. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno September 4, 2009 at 12:26 AM Thank you Doris for supporting my contest...Raul

Katie Mitchell September 3, 2009 at 3:22 PM This one is definitely creative! Hope the buck escapes :) Katie

K K Iloduba Jnr September 3, 2009 at 3:10 PM From Sobibor?just kidding!creative one u ve here!