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For Raul Moreno

Buck panting, gurgling blood filling his lungs, run down steep slope, MUST escape... . \ \ \_ \___ \ For Raul's contest(Solace in Nature)

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Frances King

Date: 9/7/2009 5:47:00 PM

You caught the panic perfectly! Thanks for your comments, if you look at Cosmopolitan again, I've put a note to explain. I think you hunt with rifles in the US - we do it differently ...

James Fraser

Date: 9/4/2009 12:06:00 PM

Terrific Haiku, all the very best in Raul's contest>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/4/2009 3:38:00 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest Doris. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/4/2009 12:26:00 AM

Thank you Doris for supporting my contest...Raul

Katie Mitchell

Date: 9/3/2009 3:22:00 PM

This one is definitely creative! Hope the buck escapes :) Katie

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 9/3/2009 3:10:00 PM

From Sobibor?just kidding!creative one u ve here!