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For One More Chance

Mom’s birthday was yesterday. She has been gone five months.
FOR ONE MORE CHANCE I would endure the water boarding, the squeeze of my hair, for one more chance to feel the sensation of mom’s hands. Even the years of frowning face, not unhappy, just a mom doing her utmost to take care and put everything in its place. I’d do more of what she asked, even before she asked, given another chance at childhood. I’d do it right away. I’d read mom’s mind, sit by her side, fold all the towels, listen more to her childhood stories, not talk back, love her in so many unexpected ways, all her lovely days. 9/16/2021

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Date: 9/20/2021 11:29:00 AM
I would too Kim. I would too! "I’d read mom’s mind, sit by her side, fold all the towels," My mother has been gone for a year and a half now.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2021 2:42:00 PM
Hugging you, poetry sister…tears
Date: 9/16/2021 9:39:00 PM
Hello Kim ... a nice tribute for your Mum, Kim. We do appear to rue not doing more for a deeply loved one for years after their passing - Lindsay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2021 9:43:00 PM
I feel good about how I was with my mom before she died. Still, you think back to earlier days and want to do more. Thank you for your nice comment.
Date: 9/16/2021 8:36:00 AM
What are five months? You can only grieve. My wife is over four years dead. Occasionally I feel her in the sitting room. But I know it's just a dream. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2021 11:04:00 AM
Truly…one minute or four years, our dear ones are gone. God bless you, sweet friend!
Date: 9/16/2021 6:26:00 AM
Those sweet memories are a treasure. Lovely tribute, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2021 6:30:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 9/16/2021 6:19:00 AM
Time goes so quickly Kim, doesn't seem that long ago. Until you meet her again you have happy memories you can call upon. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2021 6:30:00 AM
Yes, thank you!

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