For Oblivion

(Inspired by Joe Bonamassa's "Midnight Hours")

Oh, how I hate
when sunlight has fled,
Misery visits
as I lie in bed.

I simply can’t sleep.
I just feel so bad.
By midnight’s hour
I’m sadder than sad.

The clock keeps on ticking
and  louder it seems
as I keep wishing
to fall into dreams

Chorus:
 Thoughts of you swirling and swirling around.
Where can the sweetness of comfort be found?
I need to forget you. I’m coming undone.
I beg and I beg
for Oblivion.

Oh to just dream
this sadness away.
Instead with moroseness
the whole night I stay.

If I could only
get some shut-eye.
I’m feeling so blue
I just want to die.

This dirge in the darkness
keeps coming to me.
Please let me escape
my reality.

Chorus:
 Thoughts of you swirling and swirling around.
Where can the sweetness of comfort be found?
I need to forget you. I’m coming undone.
I beg and I beg
for Oblivion.

Oblivion take me, take me away.
Oh, for oblivion
each night I pray
(repeat last two lines till end of song)

May 18, 2023
For Joe Bonamassa Inspiration 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Robert James Liguori
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Mohn Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 6:03 PM
what a lyricist you are Andrea...this is really terrific :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:06 AM
Lovely lyric. Difficult to forget someone you loved.
Peck Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:02 PM
I don't know him, like Ilene said, but you do write great lyrics! Good luck in contest!
Bauer Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 1:19 PM
I don’t know Joe Bonamassa but I love your lyrics, Andrea! This would make a wonderful song…
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Thanks so much. I wrote around 5 songs recently based on blues inspiration and this and my last one are my personal favorites. If only I knew how to write tunes!!
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 11:17 AM
I like these lyrics Andrea, I can just picture some heavy metal band belting out the cords and lyrics, (Metallica) are brilliant at bringing insanity into their songs, my type of poem, cheers David, hey captcha 4am!
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Thanks
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Deep poem! I'm not familiar with this man, but I'm sure you've done him justice.
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 3:35 PM
I never heard of him until recently!
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