For My Hands

My own hands
Give me freedom
To love art
That of writing
To love life
By pleasing you
My Tiny hands, I love you!

Those fingers
To hold my pens
Of all types
They write verses
In blue ink
Or in black ink
Allow me to please the world!

Contest : The Crown of my Body
By : Nette Onclaud
Date : 16 June 2012
Placed 1st!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 8, 2012 at 7:13 PM
Anoucheka, this is a very nice and sweet win for Nette's contest.. xox~PD
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 2:14 AM
Anoucheka congrats on your excellent win..David
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 2:12 PM
WAY TO GO. I am glad the judge liked this one as much as I did!!!
Poet Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 7:36 AM
This is an excellent write Anoucheka!Congrats on your 1st place win!
Roberts Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:25 PM
many congrats on your first place win
Gangabissoon Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:09 PM
Wow! Thks a lot! a 1st place :)
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 7:53 PM
A great poem and of course it is our hands that differentiate us from other creatures on this earth. Great choice. Congratulations on your big first. Love, Joyce
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 6:25 PM
Congrats on your wonderful first place win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Grisetti Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations on your lovely winning poem.
Rider Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement! ~Trudy~
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Nette's contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 6:22 PM
THis is wonderful how you did your poem. Hands and fingers too! Excellent theme and great delivery.
Gangabissoon Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 11:15 PM
Thks :)
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 12:42 PM
Lovely written for the contest, luck to you and hope for a win. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Gangabissoon Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 10:39 PM
Thks Anne :)
Palmer Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 8:40 AM
nicely done,wish you the best
Gangabissoon Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 8:41 AM
tks :)
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