For My Children

You’re all in charge of authoring a story
Of love and humor, suspense and glory
You’re writing starts with your very first thought
And doesn’t end til your life is naught.

Know, My Dears, these books; your own
There are no cowriters; authors unknown
Flip those pages and make your quills dance
Miss no opportunities, take a chance

If somewhere in those thick tomes of yours
You have questions “whys and what fors?”
Do not ponder and then overthink
For there’s no such thing as permanent ink

There will be some tearstained pages
Most likely in your middle ages
There will be words you’d like to forget
Or phrases in which you may regret

But when it reaches the golden stage
The best of the story in a later page
Grab a pencil and throw some sparks	
And don’t be afraid of eraser marks

Then once it’s written and you do find
There was a time of hurt when life’s unkind
Go ahead and toss out awful chapters
Because Momma loves Happily Ever Afters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 5:39 AM
All so wonderful, Rhoda!
B. Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Such a lovely rhyme, Rhoda.. Wonderful advice and perfectly penned!! Enjoyed this tremendously, Rhoda.. Blessings!!
Godwin Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 8:35 AM
This is excellent in content, delivery, flow and attitude. Just perfect and ready for a big red bow. Profoundly serious wagging a playful tail - that's my kinda Mothering so I am in love with this. I haven't done much reading/commenting in quite awhile (been too domestically everything with Billy here and other happening stuff as well) and I've barely written either so I'm a bit Soup off-center. This morning is my best atonement attempt in weeks. I'm faving this. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Horsman Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Love this, Poetic magic, so much good advice in there also...
Tripp Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:38 AM
Thank you, Harry. You are a kind heart, My dear.
Warrior Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 6:25 AM
Hey, my poetic sis lol...you got to write more...this was excellent...a winner in my court Rhoda...stay in the light...^WW^
Tripp Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:29 AM
Hey, my poetry sibling! (smiles). It seems I've drawn a blank lately. I think my muse is off vacationing in the Bahamas or something. (deserter!). Missing you. If you are on FB, find me!
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:14 PM
This is so sweet, dear. I think I have you on FB, don't I? I have not been there in ages. Just don't have time for it! ANyway, please let me know if I don't already have you as a friend there!!
Tripp Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 4:32 AM
Yes, Hon...we are friends on FB...and I know how that goes. I'm trying to keep up on Instagram, FB, and here...plus write my book and work full time...wigging out! Lol. But I miss my friends on each site if I'm away too long. What to do? What to do?...Thank you for your encouragement of my writing. It is people like you that keep me inspired to continue.
Thomas Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 9:52 AM
I'm sorry I'm only just reading this gem. Rhoda this is the letter many mothers would wish to leave their children. I do hope you're okay over there ... starting to worry a bit.
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Thank you, FJ for your concern. You are a sweetheart. Just been busy with keeping up three poetry sites, writing my book, working with someone to produce Burlap and Satin, family and home, and working so many overtime hours at my job. Much of it is self imposed stress, but that is typical of me. Thank you for caring. You are so kind.
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 6:09 AM
This is amazing! An excellent delightful poem of wisdom. A fave.
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Awww...Garsh, Susan...Thank you so much for Faving. I am honeored and humbled.
Gondolf Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Everyone gets to write their own story, except for the kids whose parents try to write their story for them. Nicely written my friend. John
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:15 PM
That is the truth, some parents are that way. I prefer to let my children make their own mistakes, as I have, as screw ups are our best teachers. Thank you for your continued support. Much appreciated, John.
Callus Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Your words of advise are not to be ignored, Rhoda. Life is made up of many different experiences...one needs to learn from them, enjoy some, discard others... and then move forward. ~ Regards // paul
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:18 PM
You are right, Paul, and I find that even at age fifty, I don't have it all figured out, other than the fact that eraser marks and missing chapters are a wise move. lol. Thank you, Dear, for your friendship. It is invaluable.
Adams Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Amazing, heartfelt, and possibly the longest poem I've read clear through. (I have the attention span of a gnat) You are truly amazing Rhoda. Well done!
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Lol, Pat. You and I both with that attention span thing. Thank you for hanging in to the end. I feel honored and special. Hugs!
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