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For Mikki

FOR MIKKI

Columbus did not America discover – 
      take note
Twas the owl and the ***** cat in their 
      pea green boat 

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I do not understand the four stars. Why ruin my poem soup moguls?

Copyright © Daver Austin | Year Posted 2014

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Kathryn Collins Date: 2/1/2014 9:11:00 AM Daver - Your mind is a strange and beautiful place. love you, Kathy Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 1/27/2014 12:55:00 AM Have sent soup mail..'cation' maybe runny..' L o l..' Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 1/24/2014 3:48:00 PM What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please. Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 1/23/2014 8:28:00 AM Geez, I know you weren't being crude Daver! Sometimes words can be interpreted elsewise? depending on what warped minded ninny is doing the interpretating?? On the other hand, they more than likey have an automatic booboo correcting device? Call the coastguard, I think that ktty was pushed overboard! Keep well and stay happy! Love, Mikki Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/22/2014 9:16:00 PM I mean come on, the title of the story is the owl and the pussycat. I have seen TONS of poems here so sexually explicit and nothing even happens to them. GEEEEZ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/22/2014 9:15:00 PM hahahahaha. you can't say pussy even in front of cat??. OH MY GOSH, how ridiculous. Login to Reply

Mark Peterson Date: 1/22/2014 12:48:00 PM A fun little verse. I think the transmogrification of your poem called greater attention to the notion they wished to suppress and so had the opposite effect. Login to Reply Daver Austin Date: 1/23/2014 8:57:00 AM Thanks, Mark. I can only deduce that use of a title is against some law - The Owl and the Pussy Cat by Eugene Field.- If the deleting is sexual, then whoever aborted the word is definitely deranged. daver11

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/22/2014 9:34:00 AM You could have used kitty cat and everyone would have understood..I am glad to learn that it was the owl and cat that discovered America for I have read about them..Sara ..Oh! Great work.. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/22/2014 9:34:00 AM Or you could have used prutty cat..Sara