For Mikki

FOR MIKKI Columbus did not America discover take note Twas the owl and the ***** cat in their pea green boat

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2014 7:33:00 PM

daver, I better soupmail you and tell you the meaning of the word. hahaha. You remind me of my mom, some of the jargon we use she has no clue what we are talking about!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2014 6:47:00 PM

hahaha. So cute. But this is not free verse, it's a rhyme!! And who is Mikki? Or is it a kitty cat?

Daver Austin
Date: 1/22/2014 9:14:00 AM

What ever the form, Andrea, why did the soup put in those four stars and ruin my "rhyme." daver

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2014 4:09:00 PM

ha ha Daver, Mikki will love this one. I sure did. Clever indeed. <3 Love ~SKAT~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/21/2014 12:07:00 PM

very clever, daver.. you give silverstein a run for his money... much enjoyed really imaginative!.. hugggs

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/21/2014 10:42:00 AM

well I have tried at least six times, to leave a reply to your last comment Daver..' but i kept ending up back at your page..' anyso..here I am and a very fine poem do I see; hmm..' If the owl gives a hoot, we'll have to see..no make that listen L O L )) now I should think the cats grinning though, yes as far as long life goes you did ok on commenting, I was a bit deflated at the other observation though..O H well, can't have it all I suppose, keep well, Joe..)