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For Michael

So let dust sleep For it was all we were before the flame Had brazen a pot for the potter's fame Held together rivets of dream Nothing left now, mere form For the feeding of miry worm And the memory bright with esteem And these too shall past Like a drip in the vast Domain of clay From stars to the roots of hay So let dust sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2010 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations L'Nass, on your success in Brian’s “A RONDEL” contest with this very thought provoking poem. It's easy to see why you placed. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:59:00 PM
L'nass. I love the way you write and this poem proves how talented you are. I am so happy it was recognized. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/14/2010 4:29:00 AM
Nice poem very deep, I feel with you coming from
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:30:00 AM
You are really talented,,,wish you the best,,,sometimes poems can touch the people we care for,,then sometimes they don't seem to notice that the poem reflects them,,,so sad,,,you ownder how you can get through,,, Thank you for reading my poem
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Shango, and I see the tribute poem to you ranked high too!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest L'nass. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/4/2010 7:45:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest L'nass.Rgds Brian.My latest contest SPACES is now open
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Date: 2/2/2010 8:43:00 AM
Another amazing entry from one of the truest poets on the Soup. ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/2/2010 3:28:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest L'nass.Rgds Brian
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