For Me

"You can't do it!" This is what I heard My mind whirled in disagreement I can, she chose me. The silky smooth coat My hands never wishing to leave The unbelievable trust in her eyes The nudge of encouragement I receive. My body shakes as I slip on She stays without movement The nudge of my legs lead her She glides like the wind; just her and me.

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Sean L Sanders

Date: 7/28/2013 4:10:00 PM

Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2013 9:00:00 PM

Hi Emily, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/27/2013 6:08:00 PM

congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 7/27/2013 11:05:00 AM

† Somewhat Wild Of Creativity This Seems An Abstract And Different Possibilities As Interpretations Unto Me ? Is It Object Abject Metaphoric Or Perhaps Even Symbolic ? Wonderful Feature I Would Say For These Very Reasons And Yes Your Beauty Can ˜ Love, John