For Luck

A penny that’s heads up And a four leaf clover Both are lucky when found Though hard to find Russell Sivey Modified Dodoitsu 6/6/6/4

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Kash Poet

Date: 6/5/2012 3:55:00 PM

Interesting write here Russell.Enjoyed the read.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2012 3:34:00 PM

stunning way to express the charm of luck, russell...a real treat with a dash of finery of short form... incredible!..:)hugggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2012 9:25:00 PM

Cool one, Russell. I love finding these. I never heard the one about the penny being heads up. I just always heard: See a penny pick it up, the rest of the day you'll have good luck. See a penny, let it lay. bad luck you'll have the rest of the day! (you should see all the pennies I collect in my purse thanks to that rhyme my mom taught me)