For Keepsakes

you must of have been a beautiful baby
for when I first became pregnate I didn't
want any children

with a tiny frame and underweight body
I was content with own self just being me
and now the biggest choice had to be dealt with

thru each doctor visit of getting stuck with needles
drinking ungodly fluids to radiate my body 
and to be poked and probed by doctors I didn't know

not to mention having swollen feet severe heartburn everyday
hemroids and the throwing up for four months did I really
want to put myself thru this all to be a new mother

I knew when I first saw the ultra sound images
there was no other choice but to keep battling the odds
that were stacked against me


as I talked to you each day in my womb I kept letting
you know that mama would keep you safe from any storm
and there shall never be any doubt of me not wanting you

so my little darling you must have been a beautiful baby
for today I am watching you turn into a beautiful young woman
with a beautiful heart like your mama





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Deborah Guzzi's
You Must Have Been A Beautiful Baby

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/5/2009 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful, very sweet and loving... Great write!
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Date: 6/6/2009 8:56:00 AM
This is written with such love..when I spoke to you in the womb..such devotion and kindness...love this and best wishes.
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Date: 6/6/2009 7:28:00 AM
Spoken with a mother's love....everything that seemed so difficult seems worth it, when such maternal love shines! Very nicely done, Katherine. Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/6/2009 6:54:00 AM
How sweet the way you talked to your child in the womb. Surely it was worth the struggle with your health to have "such a beautiful baby." Very nice, Katherine! Love, Carolyn
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