For Jacqueline

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Jacqueline, Oh, just the other day I came across a picture of you with your horse, and I was amazed to see how much we look alike; Mom, could it be true that you are mere words upon cold stone, my quiet, beautiful and kind Jacqueline . . . It is unbelievable you left this world on Mother's Day, now, entangled, meshed, intertwined are our souls for eternity; the meaning of love and so much more is what you left with me, and I am so proud to be the daughter of one such as you . . . Mommy, not a day goes by that you are not in my heart, especially each Mother's Day, but every single moment of each day; and each time I ride my horse you are with me riding along side the wind in our hair and open meadows ahead of us . . . _________________________ March 14, 2015- Reprint 2021 "Mommy, I have things to tell you small things and big things, things only you will understand." Quote by _Constance In Remembrance of my Mom, Jacqueline on Mother's Day, 2021

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/7/2021 3:46:00 PM

Such a tender poem so well written dear Constance, winning wishes, keep well, and keep the smile, :)

Constance La France
Date: 5/8/2021 2:53:00 PM

Mystic, thank you for the nice compliment, appreciate so much, love _Constance

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/7/2021 2:45:00 PM

Happy mother's day; this is an exquisite poem. So heart-touching... You're in the letters and every verse; you realize when it's our moms, the individuals Who paint the world a rainbow when it's loaded up with broken dreams, it's exceptionally pitiful and powerful she passed on Mother's Day, blessings, peace, and love

Constance La France
Date: 5/8/2021 2:54:00 PM

Lasaad, thank you so much for the compliment and the lovely comment, yes it was a sad day for her to die especially when it was my decision to turn off her life support, peace - Constance

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/7/2021 2:23:00 PM

A beautiful poem and loving tribute to your mum Constance, you see yourself in her, what a wonderful realization, its very sad and poignant she passed on Mother’s Day, I hope writing this poem helped you along, cheers David

Constance La France
Date: 5/8/2021 2:57:00 PM

David, thank you for the nice comment and your compassion, yes, I have a lot of my mother in me, which makes me very proud, I plan to post this poem every Mother's Day and will take the long bus ride to the cemetery with a single red rose, peace _Constance