James Horn Poet Couplet

For Another Great Poem

For Another Great Poem

For another great poem my mind is panting
And thank God for granting and planting
Poem I could never think of or ever do
Let God set perfect example for me and you.

Thought I was big, bragged and did boast
When I ate fastest will consume the most
Don't take God for granted or advantaged of
When He wants us to trust, obey and love.

If you want to write poem better then that
We will be both going into mortal combat
And I may be starting out as a beginner
But with God will end up being a big winner.

Which part of this poem did you disagree with?

James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran and Poet

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