For Another Great Poem

For Another Great Poem For another great poem my mind is panting And thank God for granting and planting Poem I could never think of or ever do Let God set perfect example for me and you. Thought I was big, bragged and did boast When I ate fastest will consume the most Don't take God for granted or advantaged of When He wants us to trust, obey and love. If you want to write poem better then that We will be both going into mortal combat And I may be starting out as a beginner But with God will end up being a big winner. Which part of this poem did you disagree with? James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran and Poet