Footy

The ball is bounced high Both ruckmen prepare their flight Now all are watching

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/23/2024 3:09:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2021 7:53:00 AM

I dont know anything about footy but enjoyed your poem - I'd classify it as a senryu rather than a haiku - would have mailed you but you dont have soup mail available:-) hugs Jan xx

Luke Peter
Date: 7/27/2021 9:09:00 AM

Cheers Jan! I appreciate you informing me about how this is a Senryu rather than a Haiku. I am new to poetry and am very grateful for all the help I can get. Apologies for not having soup mail available. I was unsure about what it was, but I have now made it available. Have a great day, Luke.