Footsteps in snow

In the land of spring where hope was born
it's gift - release of winter's hold. 
The sun of summer lost its luster 
following some how., days take a low bow,
streaked trials all but lost. 
  
Now the days shorter than a lit match' dream. 
a moment caught in light tho' weak, just a ray.
Dark hooded and clothed in a fallen snow, 
Christmas always wished it just that way. 

Hand sore from barbed wire's wretched greeting, 
on a winter's walk I wandered on.
Pink glow of youth' robust cheek, sure of foot, still searching 
time's meaning of So long.

My father's stride now recognized, 
though stronger than in memory's glow.. 
intersected my own low stuttered step 
printed before me in light gathering snow.

Will landscape of winter's white recall my feet,
as I walk the trail where foot steps converge again.
Years on, still hold my children's hands..  
awed in perfect artistry of falling weight and wind.

Tell you once in awhile, while lookin' away..
just at a whisper when you're near,
thanks for bein' here.. 
Christmas always wished it just that way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Alhemaidy Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 3:57 AM
Very nice read!
Warlov Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Reading "The Tell-Tale Heart" to children. ~ Start quietly and halfway through, an assistant starts banging the floor with a foot in heartbeat rhythm and nearing the end raise your voice 'till the last line which YOU SCREAM! My kids are still in therapy but they love the library!
Sands Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 2:51 AM
This poem captures me. Worth reading more than once. A Fave :)
Larson Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 6:18 PM
Thanks for your comment on my poem. Have been absent for a while . . .your comment much appreciated. On your poem, Footprints in snow . . .magical. Wish I could have written this one.
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 10:47 AM
What a lovely poem this is. Nostalgic and profound.
Kendrick Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 12:58 PM
Some good descriptions in this one. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 9:46 AM
WOW! The magic of poetry intertwined with so dear pure feelings of longing and of pondering.. The festivities of Christmas evokes reminiscences of earlier days with dear and loved ones.. only memories and the print of steps remain.. We just want to relish in the now celebrating with our offsprings and the ones we love.. Great poetry of depth, beauty and true feelings.. I so much enjoyed the whole feel..an immense pleasure to read you, Richard. Stay always blessed and happy. Best regards.
Hind Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 7:58 PM
This is beautiful - and I liked your style and flow of words
Theraven Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 9:08 PM
Paige, Thanks for that comment of my many scattered words. Watching Mister Magoo's Christmas Carol. Like to listen to the songs. -Richard
Harp Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 10:54 AM
This is an amazing poem, and you have quite a talent with your other poems, too. Original perspectives and phrases.
Theraven Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 10:44 PM
Moon, Thank you, one of my favorite things, memories. Never forget what was meant to be remembered. -Richard
Greenhough Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 6:41 AM
I felt the warmth of a loved one who is present in winter's chill. It is a lovely poem.
Theraven Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 10:41 PM
Thank you for this warmth Hilda. Merry Christmas. -Richard
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