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Footsteps Echo Below

In my dreams Paces a lioness Footsteps echo below Sensual her abode In the jungle's glow Ravenous, her gaze A gazelle races by If dinner, dismembered Dry-bones' dissociation Bloody cherry-pie Dessert's constitution July 02, 2019 Another Eight-Word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 7/4/2019 11:01:00 AM
"bloody cherry pie" - ouch! I may never be able to look at cherry pie again. Your imagery is well received.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2019 12:43:00 PM
Oh, just think of the 'bloody' as that overused British adjective and you'll be just fine. LOL. Thanks for the feedback. :) gw

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