Footroo

One flight of steps down 
                    you can smell it
                       the putrid odour of urine
your eyes must adjust to the darkness
then you hear it
              in the distance
                           Clunk, thud, Clunk
the sound of metal on stone
followed by loud swears
                           Funk, thud, Funk
              closer now
Then you see him
                     a begrimed creature
Hobbling on a crutch
                     propping his metal leg,
             lost in the war
War 
        had broken him, 
                               physically
furrowed pain upon his face
                   he still rues his lost foot  
People call him “Footroo”
  	          Cause he hops like one
he spends his days underground
                   away from the nastiness
                               new enemies abound
Peace (huh)
              had shattered him, 
                                mentally.
This is his bomb-shelter now…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Sambourne Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 7:06 AM
A very powerful poem. The image of this broken war hero ("begrimed creature") is searing. An exceptional write, Sean. Congratulations! Brian
Kibble Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 5:21 PM
Thank you Brian
Agustin Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 9:22 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... grim reality in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
Kibble Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 9:33 PM
Thank you
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