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image was the prompt for this poem; image by Cendrine Morrouat

FOOTPRINTS ON THE SEASHORE

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I traipse along the seashore where the tide forgets its name, where the seagulls cry like lost receipts, where the sand, pale as a sleepless page, whispers: Look down. Look down. But I search the horizon instead~ that bluish orange hyphen between here and whatever comes next. The ocean licks its lips, spatting out a shell, half-cracked, a confession in porcelain. Is this you? the waves murmur, rolling their r’s like a drunk god. I hold it to my ear~ hear the static of a thousand voices and the hiss of dead radios. A crab scurries by me, dragging its life like a piece of baggage with damaged wheels. You’re overthinking it, says the wind, but the wind always says that. At twilight, my silhouette stretches long, a black rope thrown toward the sea. I tug. Nothing tugs back. And the moon, that cheap spotlight, clicks on—illuminating only how far I haven’t gone. Poem published at creativeramblings.com/writing-prompts/writing-challenge-27/ on February 22, 2026
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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 1:17 PM
Lovely poem. Particularly loved "A crab scurries by me, dragging its life like a piece of baggage with damaged wheels"
Hind Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 10:39 PM
Congrats!!...and this was amazing "look down, look down" part
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