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Footprints In the Snow

Walking under overcast sky
I trod through drifted snow,
no longer bearing allegiance
to platitudes disguised as wisdom
spun in gingerbread houses of the holy, 
an asymmetrically challenged splinter 
on a white horizon,
leaving a trail of footprints
on my frozen path.

Behind me lies the ranch house,
shutters closed in rapid eye movement,
dreaming of acres of wheat and barley
gleaming in July's opaque sunlight.
They will not know I've gone,
will assume I'm out walking.
Only as gray dusk settles
on the porcelain landscape
will they wonder where I am.

In my dark coat and cap,
shouldering a pack, 
I move past the fence posts
where snow mounds like the litter
of attic antiques reciting memories
in foreign tongues.
One leafless elm bears witness
to my departure, waving
in benign breeze.

Lest my tears freeze I hold them back.
Though my footprints sprint backwards
in the charcoal of sacrosanct earth
I must stay to my gospel:
to the naked eye the flat distance 
may only promise glaciers,
but I seek the aurora borealis
hidden in daylight's dim emergence,
where the crocus blooms
in barren existence.

11/29/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Stathakis Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 7:50 PM
Beautiful poem. Sometimes one needs to leave that something behind, in order to find that which might be better. Congratulations and take care, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thank you very much, George.
Blodgett Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Seeking where the crocus bloom is so poignant in its resolve. Love this Dale! Lonna
Cozart Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thanks so much, Lonna.
Capitano Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Change can be very challenging but needed for growth; way to stick to your beliefs in spite of others who might not understand. Congrats on your win.
Cozart Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Thanks, Phil.
Allison Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 3:40 PM
I found the poem both sad and uplifting moving on to pastures new but leaving the past behind, Many congrats on your win Dale love your interpretation of the contest prompt:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Thanks so much, Jan.
Ashley Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Dale, your poem, of chasing one’s heart’s desire, is beautifully emotive in the mixed emotions experienced of someone leaving one life-path to walk another on a journey of self-fulfillment. Awesome poetry. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Green Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Really very cool Dale. Paints a picture in the mind that is a bit sad but very freeing. Nicely done.
Cozart Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thanks very much, Chris. Good to hear from you.
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 6:35 AM
A magnificent poem..so well written, Dale!
Cozart Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Thanks very much, Vijay.
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