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Thanks to Jerry Bolton for his comment on my Winter haiku  which lead to the inspiration for this new haiku:-)

~awarded 1st place in PD's winter contest ~

Footprints

footprints in the snow follow them and discover the door to my heart Entered in contest #2 of 100 sponsored by PD Linda :-) 7th October 2014
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De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:34 AM
a great Haiku, congrats on your win.
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 6:40 PM
Thanks Seosamh:-) hugs jan xx
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:50 PM
A beautiful haiku, Jan! Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 6:40 PM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Revisiting to wish you congratulation on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Thanks as ever BL:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Hi Jan, You have penned a sweet and beautiful haiku. Congrats on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved 7:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:20 PM
:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Hi Jan, You have penned a sweet and beautiful haiku. Congrats on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved 7:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 1:35 PM
Hello Jan, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like,,,((wait a minute, I already saw you stopped by THANKS!!!!))..... Love LINDA
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:19 PM
I am loving your idea of 100 contests Linda - a great way to showcase our older poems that seldom get read anymore:-) hugs Jan xx
Richards Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 1:33 PM
What a sweet thought this is !! Nicely done, Jan !! Congratulations !!
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Thanks Carrie its so wonderful to be able to showcase our older poems I am loving PD's idea:-) hugs Jan xx
Bateson Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 11:30 AM
beautiful write
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 1:39 PM
Thanks so much Betty:-) Hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:06 PM
I wonder if these footprints are yours or do they belong to someone you love?... A very thought provoking and charming winter poem! Congrats on winning first place with it, Jan!
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comment Kelly:-) Hugs Jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Wow, 1st place. Congratulations on your great win. XOXO
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 3:19 PM
I am stunned Brenda! Its lovely to see you back - have missed you my friend:-) xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 5:00 PM
Yours is so awesome. I think your best haiku ever. Congrats in the contest.
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 5:03 PM
Aww thanks Andrea YOUR lovely comment truly means the world to me thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:21 PM
So sweet, dear Jan!... Congrats on a great win, my friend!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Many thanks for your lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xxx
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 1:21 PM
congratulations Jan on this fine win
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Many thanks Robert:-) Hugs jan xx
Mohn Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 1:21 PM
Beautiful Jan...big congrats
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:00 PM
Thanks so much David:-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations Jan on your first place win. This is more than worthy of that honor. A Fav!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 3:19 AM
Kudos Jan.. :)! Happy weekend.. :D!
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:18 AM
Thanks Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:59 AM
footprints in the snow/ To Jan Allison I bow/ I am impressed wow/ LOVE>Congrats>Rajat
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:18 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kayode Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 10:06 PM
This is marvelous, congrats on the win Jan...huggs
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:16 AM
Thanks so much Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:40 PM
Congrats on a great win Jan
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:17 AM
Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Mehta Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 8:49 PM
Congrats on the high rated poem, Jan
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:16 AM
Thanks so much Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Beautiful Jan! Congrats on a Number One win with this beauty!
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Many thnaks for your kind words Connie:-) Hugs jan xx
Poteet Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Jan, your notes make me curious. Awesome piece, Congratulations
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:29 PM
I wrote a winter haiku which Jerry commented on and his comments inspired me on to write this poem:-) Hugs Jan x
A   Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:10 PM
Jan, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Thanks again Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Hello Jan, mighty clever :) and soooo sweet... PD
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Thanks so much Linda I was delighted to get a first with this :-) Hugs Jan xx
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