Francine Roberts Poet Free verse

Footprints

I leave footprints in the wet sand.

They meander with no rhyme or reason

headed towards a pastel sunset

where pinks and mauves touch

the deepening hue of the beach.

The colours ... just beyond my reach

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Dave Taylor January 16, 2015 at 10:44 PM Hi, felt as if I was there as the beach darkened. Loved the feeling you give of wanting to touch the colours and capture it in some way. Dave

Jiril Clemons December 9, 2013 at 12:03 PM Deep poem Francine. Excellently portrayed image of the beach in such few words, It was just as beautiful though. Check out some of mine. Peace.

Connie Marcum Wong August 28, 2013 at 3:36 AM A beautiful free verse poem Francine. Your subject and imagery melded together as lovely as a Monet painting!

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2013 at 3:30 PM wow, this is simply gorgeous, Francine!

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2013 at 10:59 PM deep... always..LINDA