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Footprints

I leave footprints in the wet sand. They meander with no rhyme or reason headed towards a pastel sunset where pinks and mauves touch the deepening hue of the beach. The colours ... just beyond my reach

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/16/2015 10:44:00 PM
Hi, felt as if I was there as the beach darkened. Loved the feeling you give of wanting to touch the colours and capture it in some way. Dave
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Date: 12/9/2013 12:03:00 PM
Deep poem Francine. Excellently portrayed image of the beach in such few words, It was just as beautiful though. Check out some of mine. Peace.
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Date: 8/28/2013 3:36:00 AM
A beautiful free verse poem Francine. Your subject and imagery melded together as lovely as a Monet painting!
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Date: 7/24/2013 3:30:00 PM
wow, this is simply gorgeous, Francine!
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Date: 7/23/2013 10:59:00 PM
deep... always..LINDA
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