Andrew Crisci Poet Light Verse

Footle-Swift Beats

Crowds hiss...
lost race!
Horse snorts
a curse!  
Kids scream...
field clean!
Swift beats 
for thieves!
Death bound...
loud sound!
Red light...
hang tight!
Crash!!! Bang!!!
Bills land!!!
  

   
Entered in Donna Golden's Footle fright contest

Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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October 15, 2009 at 3:48 PM Sounds scary to me. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown October 14, 2009 at 4:32 AM Wishing you the best in Donna's contest Andrew. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire October 13, 2009 at 8:23 AM Bewitching write, Andrew. Only sharks and alligators scare me, not the sights we see on Halloween. They're more amusing! Love, Carolyn