Footles

Couch Potato

Sofa
loafer


Tummy Rumble

A snack
attack

Soft drink shortage

Soda
hoarder


Dated: 8/19/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations on your footle win, Theresa.
Stephens Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 4:11 PM
Thank you Faye, so kind of you to read and comment. All the best Theresa xx
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Uniquely written..Congrats on your winning work!!! Sara
Stephens Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 4:15 PM
Hi Sara, Much appreciate your lovely comments. Thank you. Regards Theresa xx
Callus Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:46 AM
Congrats on your win, Theresa! Hope your tummy cravings have been dealt with! // paul
Stephens Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Paul. Had to stick with the theme!. So good of you to send your most welcome comments. Regards Theresa xx
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:20 AM
- Congrats Theresa - I like all three of them - Great done - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Stephens Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 4:19 PM
I am very pleased you read and liked them. Thank you for making contact and your positive comments.All the best Theresa xx
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Theresa:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Stephens Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:03 AM
Hi Jan, Thank you so much for your supportive comments. All the best Theresa xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 12:41 AM
these are really cute, Theresa. I guess I love food so much, I am drawn more to the food footles. Though the first and third do not rhyme for me, I believe the way they pronounce words back east, these are actually rhymes. Did I get that right? Congrats in my contest.
Stephens Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Hi, Thank you for the placement, much obliged for your constructive critique. It must be the pronouncement that differs!! Regards Theresa xx
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 4:13 PM
my tummy is rumbling now! great footles:-) good luck with the contest Hugs Jan xxx
Stephens Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 6:10 AM
Thank you Jan. Sorry about the delay in replying. Regards Theresa xx
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 3:02 PM
- Theresa ..... you're good !!! - Difficult to write .... fun to read !!! - Well done :)) - good luck in the contet! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Stephens Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 6:12 AM
Thank you Anne Lise, I appreciate your lovely comments. Sorry about the delay in replying. Regards Theresa xx
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