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Couch Potato Sofa loafer Tummy Rumble A snack attack Soft drink shortage Soda hoarder Dated: 8/19/14

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Date: 8/29/2014 4:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your footle win, Theresa.
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 8/29/2014 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Faye, so kind of you to read and comment. All the best Theresa xx
Date: 8/29/2014 11:51:00 AM
Uniquely written..Congrats on your winning work!!! Sara
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Date: 8/29/2014 4:15:00 PM
Hi Sara, Much appreciate your lovely comments. Thank you. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 8/29/2014 8:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Theresa! Hope your tummy cravings have been dealt with! // paul
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Date: 8/29/2014 4:13:00 PM
Thank you Paul. Had to stick with the theme!. So good of you to send your most welcome comments. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 8/29/2014 7:20:00 AM
- Congrats Theresa - I like all three of them - Great done - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 8/29/2014 4:19:00 PM
I am very pleased you read and liked them. Thank you for making contact and your positive comments.All the best Theresa xx
Date: 8/29/2014 4:56:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Theresa:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/29/2014 7:03:00 AM
Hi Jan, Thank you so much for your supportive comments. All the best Theresa xx
Date: 8/29/2014 12:41:00 AM
these are really cute, Theresa. I guess I love food so much, I am drawn more to the food footles. Though the first and third do not rhyme for me, I believe the way they pronounce words back east, these are actually rhymes. Did I get that right? Congrats in my contest.
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 8/29/2014 7:07:00 AM
Hi, Thank you for the placement, much obliged for your constructive critique. It must be the pronouncement that differs!! Regards Theresa xx
Date: 8/19/2014 4:13:00 PM
my tummy is rumbling now! great footles:-) good luck with the contest Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/10/2014 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Jan. Sorry about the delay in replying. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 8/19/2014 3:02:00 PM
- Theresa ..... you're good !!! - Difficult to write .... fun to read !!! - Well done :)) - good luck in the contet! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise, I appreciate your lovely comments. Sorry about the delay in replying. Regards Theresa xx

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