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Foot Prints In the Sand

The tides have risen past my lungs the crash of the surf tosses my fears at your feet you walk past my form each day in and out, pacing a path in the sand looking at your feet and my hair has tangled in the seaweed washed up to fill the impression of your foot prints

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Date: 6/4/2015 9:50:00 PM
Tara...your outstanding last line moves the reader to think deeply upon these "foot prints in the sand" great poem! Jimbo
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Tara Jennings
Date: 7/25/2015 9:32:00 AM
thank you James!

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