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Fools Trip Out

Life shaken Drugs taken Pills inside Love denied Life rotten Wife forgotten Pride forsaken Children taken Life lost Such a cost © Dave Timperley 2011 inspired by work in a drug rehab unit 2006

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2011 7:26:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning David. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Dave Timperley
Date: 1/16/2012 8:37:00 AM

My sincere apologies for the delay in responding to your comments Carol. Thank you for them. God Bless. Dave.

Michelle Lacey

Date: 9/8/2011 12:26:00 AM

This is very well written David, I really enjoyed it! ~Michelle~ xo

Dave Timperley
Date: 1/16/2012 8:18:00 AM

My sincere apologies for such a long delay. Thank you for your comments. God Bless. Dave.