Fools in the Dark

Brush against my shoulder.
Gently, gently,
friend
or curtain in the wind.
Light a candle,  
I’m not looking.
And when all the lights have dimmed:
come comb through the thicket of my armpits,
string the pearly, sweaty beads 
on a necklace,
moonlit, shining, 
showing me my self-deceit. 

Hanging from the lintel’s lip, 
I will catch the morning sun.
But for now, brush,
gently, gently 
and call me dear foolish one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ibeh Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 4:18 AM
Mesmerizing first poem, Thekla:-) Welcome to Poetrysoup. Keep writing, my friend..
Agustin Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 2:14 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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