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Fool's Gold

Gold
Shiny~~~Bright
Mining, Extracting, Holding
Nuggets, Money, Empty, Void
Crying, Devastating, Madding
Broken, Lost
Pyrite  

Pyrite's symbol is: FeS

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 12/21/2022 6:11:00 PM

I like the range of perspective on gold in your Diamente, Sara. Gold can be empty pit if one is robbed of health. Sincere good wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2022 4:48:00 AM

Brian, Thanks for searching this one out from long ago. I appreciate the visit and the sincere good wishes. Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 9:36:00 PM

SARA,, congratulations on your well-deserved win, enjoying the elements above. Always :) LINDA

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/7/2015 7:16:00 PM

Sara, stopping back to congratulate you on your win. Loved the way you used this Diamante form! Hugs, Sandra

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/7/2015 2:47:00 AM

Congratulations Sara luv xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/7/2015 12:15:00 AM

Wonderful Sara! Congrats on fine win! Wish u a very happy n healthy new year 2015!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/6/2015 6:30:00 PM

Loved that you used a different form for this contest! Well done, Sara !

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/6/2015 5:57:00 PM

Hey Sara write & let me know how you are? Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Jan Allison

Date: 1/6/2015 5:15:00 PM

congrats on another fine win:-) Hugs jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/6/2015 3:03:00 PM

Congrats on your fine win Sara...huggs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2015 2:38:00 PM

such a unique take on the theme, sara!... lovely form!.. sweet congrats on your award!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/6/2015 1:48:00 PM

Sara, on my adventure of gold dredging I did see a lot pyrite, congratulations on your win. 7

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/6/2015 12:31:00 PM

Your Diamante is a diamond. A good form for this particular expression. Congrats Sara. Congrats.Love-rajat

Paul Callus

Date: 1/6/2015 11:23:00 AM

I see that this Diamante has served you well once again, Sara! congratulations! All the best. // paul

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/6/2015 7:47:00 AM

nice write Sara congratulations on your win

James Fraser

Date: 12/28/2014 6:37:00 AM

Poetry to learn, love it Sara, nice one, and belated congratulations, James :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/23/2014 10:17:00 PM

An awesome diamante, Sara! Coming back to congratulate you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/22/2014 9:15:00 AM

Hi Sara, Very interesting use of "void" and "empty" to describe pyrite. This is a well thought out diamante. Congratulations on an excellent win. Earl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2014 10:58:00 PM

that was a very interesting contrast you showed. great job, and congratulations.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/18/2014 10:26:00 AM

what a lucid diamante, sara.. my sweet congrats!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/18/2014 10:17:00 AM

This is my own best and definitely a fav. A great lesson for the prodigal who always think what is plenty can not finish; how many rich families their reckless children have brought to nothingness? Immense thanks Sara,now my children can read this and learn....congrats for a Job well done.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/17/2014 9:20:00 AM

Hi Sara, what a great subject for your Diamante poem! We like to watch a TV program named "Gold Rush" and your descriptive words perfectly fit the comparison you make. Congratulations on your win! Sandra