Foolish Pride

Once at the hell gate:
"My reservation was sent"
Sinner claims, loudly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 8, 2013 at 10:57 AM
wow... Don't go....heheh JK...love it... you are a great senryu poet...LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 2:23 PM
haha. This struck me quite funny.
Candy Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 2:43 PM
:D :D :D
Tacito Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 12:44 AM
Damn! Strong! This is what happens when pride lacks substance. Excellent job!
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July 6, 2013 at 7:26 AM
HA! Too funny! :)
Candy Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 1:47 AM
I wrote this poem few hours ago while watching news about corruptor on TV..lol.. :P
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