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Foolish Pride

Once at the hell gate: "My reservation was sent" Sinner claims, loudly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/8/2013 10:57:00 AM
wow... Don't go....heheh JK...love it... you are a great senryu poet...LINDA
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Date: 7/6/2013 2:23:00 PM
haha. This struck me quite funny.
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/6/2013 2:43:00 PM
:D :D :D
Date: 7/6/2013 12:44:00 AM
Damn! Strong! This is what happens when pride lacks substance. Excellent job!
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Drake Eszes
Date: 7/6/2013 7:26:00 AM
HA! Too funny! :)
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/6/2013 1:47:00 AM
I wrote this poem few hours ago while watching news about corruptor on TV..lol.. :P